Because I wanted to...

Oh my gosh to be 14 again. If only I was as good as writing as you are when I was ohhhh so young ;) I wish the last line ...

So you made me feel like I was reading about myself :) I like it. It touched a soft spot for me. I think if you worked on it more ...

I like the way you write a lot, How the rhythms so clear. but I am left wondering what it is that broke your heart in the first place, I ...

This was nice, simple and easy to relate to. Every girl has been here at this point, looking at what they long for and seeing it with someone new. Someone ...

Absolutely haunting... I love the strong male image I get from this poem, its very intense. "Do you dare enter my domain? My mind of all minds, The secret of ...

I like how the poem just kind of stops... I love way you described the flirting between the characters and the images you get of young love, One question, were ...

I love you writing style, How what your poem is about is very open to interpretation but how you can tell in means something to you that I'm sure very ...

Great Idea. The storys super short though, which isn't always bad, but in this case I'm left wanting to know more. I think maybe you should add detail, like what ...

"in the maelstrom of life" I adore this line, the whole poem is great though "Life dealt us a chance card: a chance to get to know someone; touch hearts, ...

I like this, it is short but its good. It paints a clear picture for the reader and I think this is a wonderful example of the fact that something ...